The cold winds and the water falling from above,
Gets us drenched with a feeling of oneness and love…
Let us all dance and talk and play in this first rain,
Let us keep aside our inhibitions and brain…
Happy Monsoons…
This is what I had written last year, but the experience this year has been completely different.

Waiting at my window sill,
Watch the water droplets drip,
Dancing as if it is a drill,
Love the drop upon my lip…
I am fine no need of a pill,
The winds blow as they whip,
My life is great, no need of a fill,
Get out and love is the tip…
Am trying to write something in a different way. Maybe the poem might not make sense as a whole, but read the alternate lines and they tell a different story. You will find poem in line 1,3,5 and 7 as well as in line 2,4,6 and 8.
Please drop a message telling me if you liked it or suggesting some other ways to do my poems. Always open for love and criticism.
Very nice and lovely poem.
Enchanting lines.
Kudos. 👏👏👏💐✌
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Hey Ameet. Tum Shayar ban gaye ho! Congratulations. I love it man ❤️
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Tysm Brother
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You are most welcome dear म्हाझ्या भावा 😃
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Elvis Presley of our wordpress family ….Very curious person , good learner…
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Very nice poem !
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Tysm
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Nice poem!
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Tysm
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Khubsurat kavita.👌👌
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Shukriya Dada
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🙏🙏
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Mesmerizing one..!
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Tysm
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Outlook of environment changes depending on the weather of one’s inside 🙂 technically and emotionally playful 👍🏻
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Wow
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